Thursday 7 June 2018

Ivan drawing



we have been working on a description from the book call the one and only Ivan this is Ivan

4 comments:

  1. Hi Kahn, I'm Isabel from Wainui Beach School.
    I really like your blog post.It really pantied a picture in my mind of Ivan.It reminds me of when I read The One and Only Ivan in my class a couple years ago.
    Bye.

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  2. kia ora Kahn Im Felix from Wainui Beach School Gisborne!
    i like this blog post because it has drama and some funny parts in it.
    Also have you ever gone to the zoo?
    I would like to meet you in person. bye.

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  3. Hi it's Rata & Wyatt we think that your'e description on ivan is really deatailed but we both agree that it needs more puntuation. & the font colour is really hard to see with the picture of the gorilla behind. It kind of makes the reader focus more on the photo.. -Rata & Wyatt :)

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  4. hi kahn moody l love it is that a he or an she????????????????? by Tane moody

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