Kahn's Persuasive writing

WALT: Write a persuasive text to convince an audience of our opinion.

Did you know I'm a minecraft pro. I would like more minecraft involved in my leaning. Because it make it easy instead of having a meltdown.

One reason for this is I am starting to have more meltdowns and I think using more Minecraft will make things way easier.

Another reason is if I decided to be a builder when I am older it would help me know how to build things.  If you asked me to build things I could most probably build it.

I could be an interior designer because Minecraft lets me make things inside like a couch and TV.

Since I'm a minecraft pro I can do all of this.

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

Conclusion

• This ties back/recaps back to the introduction

Highlight evidence of linking words.

I love how you are still trying to keep the minecraft generation alive, what's good about it that you want more armour and weapons and that you want more ores and you want it in your learning, by Dylan.