Friday 17 August 2018

The Lost City

Image result for the city of olympus
This week Miss Tisdall asked us to write sentences about this picture. Here are my 
sentences .
1) I smell salt water in the foggy air. 
2) I see a colossal castle in the clouds.
 3)I hear the birds chirping while flying
I like this picture because it is cool and I could think of lots of ideas. 

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Khan, My name is Honor I am a year 7 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I really like your post on The LOst city It is a really cool picture and I like the way you have desrcibed the castel as the "colossal castel in the clouds. Why did you choose this image?
    Noho Ora Mai.
    From Honor

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  2. hi kahn moody i love the the picture and is that in the sky? well done from Tane moody

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