Kia Ora Kahn I like your choice of colours and size that you used for your poster.You used great Persuasive and emotive language.My favourite part about your poster was the smiley face with the cross through it.Maybe next time you could make sure that your work stays on the page.Keep up the good work Lily.
Kia Ora Kahn, It Junior here, this is such an amazing work you've done, you have really improve your self greatly. Your information about Mr Pent Ball is so clear. I knew from the start of the year that we have been separated classes you would do amazing and brilliant work. Next time try and put your words in the space down below, Kapai Kahn Moody!
ki ora kahn Noah J here what an awful person mr pent is no balls alowd how are supposed to play soccer or basket ball or even hockey but the way you have done this kai pai maybe next time put in some more images like a wrecking ball or different balls on there other than that good job :) from Noah J
Hey Kahn It is Pyper here from your class T1 at Grey Main School. Great Post! I really like how you have heaps of different colours I also like a big bulging words. Maybe next time you could add a backround colour. Byt anyway good job over all See you next time, Pyper
Kia Ora Kahn I like your choice of colours and size that you used for your poster.You used great Persuasive and emotive language.My favourite part about your poster was the smiley face with the cross through it.Maybe next time you could make sure that your work stays on the page.Keep up the good work Lily.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kahn, It Junior here, this is such an amazing work you've done, you have really improve your self greatly. Your information about Mr Pent Ball is so clear. I knew from the start of the year that we have been separated classes you would do amazing and brilliant work. Next time try and put your words in the space down below, Kapai Kahn Moody!
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ReplyDeleteNoah J here what an awful person mr pent is no balls alowd how are supposed to play soccer or basket ball or even hockey but the way you have done this kai pai
maybe next time put in some more images like a wrecking ball or different balls on there other than that good job :)
from Noah J
Hey Kahn
ReplyDeleteIt is Pyper here from your class T1 at Grey Main School.
Great Post! I really like how you have heaps of different colours I also like a big bulging words.
Maybe next time you could add a backround colour.
Byt anyway good job over all
See you next time, Pyper