Thursday 5 March 2020

Kahn's Haiku

This week Miss Power got us to make a Haiku about our self or seasons I chose doing it about myself and . It was really hard. You 1st need  5 syllables. Next you need is 7 syllables and finally for the 3rd you need is 5 syllables.
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6 comments:

  1. Nanna and Granddad Moody5 March 2020 at 11:50

    Well done Kahn a good Haiku.

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  2. Unknown6 March 2020 at 10:58

    Hi Nana & Yay Dale. Thank you for the comment, hope that you are doing well Love Kahn

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  3. Unknown6 March 2020 at 12:30

    Kia Ora Kahn this is Arli from Grey Main school in your class i really like your haiku about star wars mine craft and ice cream. i used to be a massive fan of star wars to, whats your favourite star wars movie.
    Arli.

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  4. Tineka15 April 2020 at 11:52

    Hi Kahn.
    Was nice to see your smiley face during the online session for T1 this morning.
    From your poem I get a feeling that you may be a Star Wars fan. Which one of the movies is your favourite and why?

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  5. Unknown21 April 2020 at 14:41

    Hey Kahn
    Great Haiku. I really liked how you add so much colour to it, it really makes it pop. I also like how in the deception you told the reader what a Haiku is.
    Maybe next time you could make the text A little bit bigger, it is kinda a little hard to see.
    Anyway awesome Haiku.
    From Pyper

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  6. Unknown22 April 2020 at 10:53

    Kia ora Kahn,

    I like you haiku, it made me smile.
    Hope you and your lovely family are all warm and safe during this time of Learning from Home. Are you enjoying Learning from Home?

    Looking forward to seeing you again soon,
    Mrs Gully

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